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name --- 3alo0o0o0osh

race --- Viazard

division --- 1st

age --- 14

luuks like --- 13

gender --- male

hair colour --- Black

about 3alo0o0o0osh --- 3alo0o0o0osh amlways train and 4,1 tall and 3,3 weigh Hair length when normally stats hair lenght is nearby touching shoulder but when in hollow stats hair gets longer and freax up!

looks like --- luuk at the pixure

likez --- likez training and fighting and mostly traiting and getting stronger

hatez --- 3alo0o0o0osh hatez girlz they do annoy hm very much and most hatred of his brother (Fawaz) that killed his clan

history --- 3alo0o0o0osh was born in a desert thats when his parents left him alone he was found by (narazuki zentu)) narazuki trained him and told him about his life and he gave 3alo0o0o0osh the (Saints Of Wutai) the 2 swords of wutai
and narazuki zentu died when Fawaz the hatred brother attacked 3alo0o0o0osh randomly between the years 3aloosh lived his life in pain by the hollows always attacking him sended by his brother Fawaz and he awaits to meet his brother to kill him since he got stronger when he finnaly met his brother face to face Fawazz almost killed his brother 3aloosh but 3alo0o0o0osh survived and ran away when he found his self bleeding from the fight he lost his control and his eye turned white and has a right sided dark wing appeared (that was the hollow soul inserted inside him) as if he was a hollow he started killing and eating souls to be stronger when his brother appeared and said "join us to be stronger and u wont regret it" 3alo0o0o0osh stoped destroying everything and started thinking about tatand thinking about his master saying his last words "kill your brother as if u found him" is brain was twisted and he started attaking is brother his brother was strongless when 3aloosh attacked while in hollow stats so he vanished saying "i will defeat you next tyme" and since that moment 3aloosh controled his innir hollowhe was always sad about his master death and unleashing his sadness and anger on people souls setting plans on his brother revenge ------- to be continued------

ok... 1st what is with the name, lol no offense but i can't really think 3alo0o0o0sh as a name.
2nd, nobody really follows the template these days. Its jsut copy and paste it and just fill it out, not really complicated you change absolutely nothing else in it unless you add something like hair length: )(it can be written in any way ya want)
3rd: you misspelled quite a lot,

and the division thing: last? you mean the 13th Division? if ya wanna be a Vaizard follow the correct template and fill it out correctly.

lol ok i will gotcha another admin